Why does no one answer the same message I send everyone?

You wrote a message that works in your own head, then sent it to ten people as if they share one head. They don't. The silence isn't a mystery — it's ten different people declining to answer something that wasn't really written for them. This is not a writing problem. You can polish a sentence for a week and it still won't land, because the flaw isn't in the words — it's in who you imagined while writing them. You imagined no one in particular. That's the whole answer. With others working on this beside you, don't just trade drafts. Trade the names of the actual people you're each writing to. If you can't name who you meant it for, you'll know immediately why it went nowhere.